Coursework second draft update

Now I have begun to make alterations on my magazine draft. For example, I have begun to vary the fonts on my front cover and contents page. Furthermore, I have adjusted the colours to show a variation and made them appropriate for my target audience. In addition, I carried out alterations to the interview. So next week I want to add more pictures and making other alterations to some of the layout.

First Complete Draft of Music Magazine

Here is images of my what my first draft looks like at the present time. I feel that I need to add a selection of more images but, furthermore from the video of responses given by my fellow students I will take their advice into consideration in order to improve my magazine to fulfil its full potential.

Feedback on First Draft of Music Magazine

Here is the link to my video which features a group of my fellow pupils commenting on what is good about my magazine and what can be improved. Furthermore, when producing my second draft I will consider the points mentioned from them and take them on board to make mine better.